Samuel Forders
Apprentice/Of the Crew
Tortuga Shop Keeper/Pirate
~Samuel Forders~
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Post by Samuel Forders on Oct 5, 2003 15:42:44 GMT -5
I hope your allowed to right poetry here considering I just did. Here's verse one and verse two.
Seasons Change
As the birds fly back
Through the air,
And the trees wave
Their tangled hair.
Another season
Is already here,
And already it is
Another year.
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Post by Victoria Brighton on Oct 5, 2003 15:48:39 GMT -5
Of course you're allowed to write poetry, no worries!  And you've written a glorious piece! Well done!  |
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Samuel Forders
Apprentice/Of the Crew
Tortuga Shop Keeper/Pirate
~Samuel Forders~
Posts: 121
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Post by Samuel Forders on Oct 5, 2003 16:02:44 GMT -5
Thank you! I just joined today so I'm not to sure about what to do and what not to do.
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Post by Jack Sparrow on Oct 5, 2003 16:57:45 GMT -5
YAY WE GOT ANOTHER POET!!! Nice job mate!
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Post by Arayel Montclaire on Oct 5, 2003 23:53:02 GMT -5
*Smiles warmly at the new poet* Welcome Welcome to masterpiece Isles. *extends hand* I'm Arayel, pleasure to make your aquaintance. Tis a very nice bit o' work ye got 'ere mate. Is it a work in progress? I sense by how you say verse one and verse two that more may be coming? And feel free to write as much poetry as you like.
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Samuel Forders
Apprentice/Of the Crew
Tortuga Shop Keeper/Pirate
~Samuel Forders~
Posts: 121
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Post by Samuel Forders on Oct 6, 2003 6:07:59 GMT -5
Yeah, I was hoping to continue it a littl bit. Here are the last two verses. It's slightly despairing though.
Seasons will change
And people also,
Why it is like this
I do not know.
But as we live our lives,
And time ticks by,
Seasons will change,
And we'll live and we'll die.
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Post by Jack Sparrow on Oct 6, 2003 20:45:59 GMT -5
great job
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Post by Arayel Montclaire on Oct 7, 2003 1:57:51 GMT -5
Very nice ending indeed.
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Samuel Forders
Apprentice/Of the Crew
Tortuga Shop Keeper/Pirate
~Samuel Forders~
Posts: 121
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Post by Samuel Forders on Oct 14, 2003 17:12:58 GMT -5
Glad to see you all enjoyed it, more on the way mates!
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