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Post by Rose Glassman/Hawk Aureye on Mar 27, 2004 11:11:43 GMT -5
I hope this is OK, mates, to have one thread for my IC poetry and one for my OOC poetry...I have so much OOC stuff, I don't want to try to edit it all to fit my IC one. ^_^;;; If this isn't OK, just let me know, please!
Here's my first "work"...written about myself, in one of my darker "musey moods" as I like to call them, where I isolate myself and just sit and think about...everything. ^^;
[glow=red,2,300]Silence[/glow] Silence In the air surrounding me Like a bubble Shielding me From the hustle and bustle Of the outside world What's going on outside? I can't tell I'm enclosed in my bubble Silently Everything blurs Away from my face People talk, laugh, enjoy themselves As I sit in silence If they approach me They blur And the silence around me Shooes them away I'd like to break away But the silence I'm accustomed to Would make me an outcast Unable to blend in The world of cheerful noise And if the bubble was to shatter Everyone would notice So I sit The bubble telling everyone To pay no heed to me For I'm alone As I sit In silence.
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Post by Evelyn on Mar 27, 2004 16:04:19 GMT -5
Nice one Rose, really. I feel that way sometimes as well...can completely relate...Great job mate...an' here's a little prize mate...
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Post by Jack Sparrow on Mar 30, 2004 14:58:45 GMT -5
:reads and rereads and rereads over and over agin then cheers: wonderful!
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Post by Savannah Padraigin O'Mannon on Mar 31, 2004 13:48:25 GMT -5
oh Bravo Mate! that was Brill!
I can Totally relate with those "Musey moods"! *grins and winks*
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Post by Rose Glassman/Hawk Aureye on Apr 10, 2004 16:52:24 GMT -5
Well, after a 10-day hiatus, I'm back...with a slightly darker-themed poem...to a friend of mine, who thought I did something I didn't.
[shadow=red,left,300]Betrayal[/shadow] Betrayal In your eyes It's oh-so-plain Please don't go Don't turn away I didn't say it I didn't mean to Even if I did Which I didn't - You know me well enough To know that I wouldn't let this happen - Please don't do this Don't make me so guilty So upset I did nothing Please don't go Don't turn away from me With betrayal In your eyes...
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Post by Rose Glassman/Hawk Aureye on Apr 25, 2004 8:54:30 GMT -5
A poem for my mom...whose temper's really bad, so she's caused me and my sister so many tears...
[shadow=blue,left,300]Stop[/shadow] Stop yelling Please Just shut up and leave me be I know I messed up, all right? And may have done it in the past But it's over with I've been chastised I know what I did was wrong But don't bring it up again Just like you always do Always Always You yell And you scream at me With that furious look on your face. We all wish you'd stop, you know, And leave us in peace None of us wants to say so But, Mom, We can't live in the dark In fear of your temper All our lives. You're gonna make us crack someday So for your own sake And yes, for ours, Just stop Stop yelling Stop screaming Stop losing your temper Just stop...
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Post by Savannah Padraigin O'Mannon on Apr 26, 2004 14:02:26 GMT -5
awwww... thats Sad Rose! written Really well, but really sad...
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Post by Jack Sparrow on May 4, 2004 14:25:18 GMT -5
:scampers in and smiles: nice.a bit dark..but...........very good....very very very good!
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Post by Rose Glassman/Hawk Aureye on May 4, 2004 14:51:25 GMT -5
Thankees, mates...yeah, I usually write poetry to relieve anger/sadness/stress, so most of it's dark...I'll post a happy one next, heehee, just to lighten the mood ^^
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Post by Roux on May 4, 2004 14:54:42 GMT -5
good thing to write what you feel. it gets all that emotion out in the open. nice job
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