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Post by Rose Glassman/Hawk Aureye on Mar 27, 2004 10:28:28 GMT -5
*jawdrop* Mother o' God, Eve, what poetry!! Revenge, the Fallen Angel poem, the first sonnet, the Rose poem, Beyond, Mirage, Cold, and Broken were my favourites, but they're all amazing...wow...I'm totally stunned...beautiful work, mate, beautiful.
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Post by Savannah Padraigin O'Mannon on Mar 27, 2004 10:34:19 GMT -5
*does "Jacks prayer hands" *thank ye' m'lady....much obliged... and I would like te say thank'ye for sharin' your talent with us humble Pirates...*grins and bows*
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Post by Evelyn on Mar 27, 2004 16:02:17 GMT -5
*blushes* Awww...you two...don' need to go grovelin' now...if ye wanted some rum ye coulda just asked...*grins*. No, truly mates, much obliged! Thank ye so much for your comments, really appreciated. I really only like a few of them, the ones Rose mentioned are some. I'm tryin' to get better and I can actually read my poetry without cringin' too much now. Thank ye so much! *huggles Rose and Savvy* Really thanks for the commments, and keep checkin' back mates, ye never know what else I'll come up with..*winks*
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Post by Evelyn on Apr 25, 2004 12:24:14 GMT -5
The Future
When all the world is peaceful, When flowers bloom and grow, That is when there will be happiness, That is when the world shall know,
That happiness has truly reached us, That the frost had melted leaving Spring, That no hunger can be felt any longer, That finally, there is a sound reason to sing,
But that will never happen, it never ever could, When one is with an infliction, one must treat it, And the world has had this disease so long, That any healing now would be unheeded,
Instead the world would turn to pain, As it has done and always will, Focus on what's to remain, And not in the hope the slow healing could instill,
So I will walk among the beauty, of the blue, the brown, the green, That which is yet untouched by man, The earth's only true disease,
This parasite that has touched it, The earth can sadly not shake, For we are the brilliant thus, making us the worst pill to take,
What can one do watching a race, That slowly rots away, What can one do in world so full of evil, One destined to decay?
Fend for yourself and attempt to find the innocent The ones yet unknowing of the jagged, Of the rough, tough, tumbled, truth, That sadly we pass on to them, they in the end shall have it.
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Post by Evelyn on Nov 10, 2004 23:05:28 GMT -5
~Untitled II~
I held my breath, far too long, And now I cannot breathe again Starch reality begins to sink in, And all I feel is dread
I fell too hard, oh so hard, Onto this grimy, stony, floor I did not see where I was going, Do I care if I do anymore?
A gust of wind has robbed me, And a fragment of my heart now flutters away, All the proof of a heart lost, is now swiftly led astray.
Moon, oh lonesome light that which once guided my hope. Now beams a torrid, blinding reminder, of a heart that cannot and won't...
Will he not say his farewells, Will he not pass out much needed fickle words? For that is all I linger on, Lest I dare to venture forward...
Plunge into an abyss, darkened, made hallow out of grief, rotted, broken, lest he stay, or at least say that we will be...
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Post by Jack Sparrow on Nov 13, 2004 0:39:43 GMT -5
aww...pretty, Evy. Really. even if you did just depress me a tiny bit. they're wonderful. ::huggles most tightly::
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Post by Evelyn on Nov 13, 2004 1:38:32 GMT -5
Oh and thanks a bunch for the encouraging words Jack... Really appreciate it...*hugs* Roots Where can I go, how far may I expect to rise? How far will I reach before I fall? What fruit can I expel? Where are my dull, simple, memories? Where has all my past gone? Why won't my mind latch on to one? How can there be none? An old chest with crinkled letters, Perhaps a shoebox or two. Scattered with tiny pearls, Or littered simply with meaningful dust. Where are my happy thoughts, and where do I truly trace back? How can I find my ultimate end If I have no roots to tend? There is no start, no beginning, nothing- Only stolen thoughts and dreams. Wishes taken from others in hopes That it would ultimately be mistaken for mine. Where is my identity, a shoe, a ring, a kiss? How can I venture onward, Achieve my dreams, If I have claims to none... ~Simply~ Simply my dreams, Simply my reality, Simply all and completely me, Simply everything. Simply nothing, Simply love, Simply lust, Simply a lasting hug. Simply words, Simply care, Simply melancholy, and simple unjust death. ~Turning Dancer~ I am a turning dancer, dancing and spinning accordingly. There is no imbalance to my dance, no irregularity. I am a reliable mechanism. Wind me up and behold the show. There is nothing to interfere with this event, No fatigue can rendor me slowed... A turning dancer spinning still. An ongoing, endless ring. Nothing freezes, nothing stops. Never...not for me...
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Post by Evelyn on Jul 8, 2006 2:35:07 GMT -5
Here is my drawing version of Evelyn. I drew this not too long ago but well this was how I originally pictured Evy before it was suggested that I use Kate as the picture for her Icon and Siggy. It was weird that it didn't click to me before it had been suggested. I saw the movie and Kate really is REALLY close to what I always had pictured as Evelyn looking like!
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Post by Emma Hawkins/Rick MacKinnon on Jul 8, 2006 19:42:09 GMT -5
Shiny ^^ I like it, Evy. Her hair's pretty...
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Post by Eric Jackson on Jul 9, 2006 15:32:01 GMT -5
Very awesome job mate, you told me about it last night and I was all excited to come over and see it! *Eric woots at the ickle last name on there* She's so purdyful and I love the outfit you gave her, I'm pretty much jealous of it lol!! I can't draw Eric without wanting to draw Heath lol, as I was looking at a Knights Tale poster of him when I decided he'd make an awesome character then spawned Eric...so he's always pretty much been Eric in my brain. But yeah, if ye draw any more I'm uberly excited to see them!!
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Post by Evelyn on Jul 9, 2006 21:26:29 GMT -5
Thanks for the compliments guys! Yes I was so proud of it when it was all finished. I thought I did her justice enough. I am going to be taking some drawing stuff with me to Montana and hopefully I can churn out a good drawing of Eric WITH Evy while I'm there! *cackles* And thanks Em, I'm glad you liked her hair! That was the one thing that gave me the most issues you know!
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Itami
New Citizen/New Sailor
"Your pain is my purpose...."
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Post by Itami on Jul 10, 2006 0:15:55 GMT -5
WOOOT! I loves it, Evvy, truly! You're right she definitely does look like Kate... Great choice!! *bows down in awe*
(This is Bossa btw....don't feel like switching accounts ^^;; )
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Post by Saber & Kat Tompson on Jul 10, 2006 10:16:11 GMT -5
Well I told you how much I liked it over IM, but I thought I would add onto the other reviews *g*
Yays very pwetty! ^^ Love the hair and the eyes ^^
*giggles and pokes the last name* nice. I can see Eric's happy about that.
Nicely done mate ^^. I'll have to get my new drawings of Kat and Saber up here eventually *glares at her stupid scanner that makes everything come out ten shades lighter then its suposed to*
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Post by Captain Morgan Barbossa on Jul 11, 2006 19:56:39 GMT -5
*Grin* I didn't even pick up on the name thing until Saber pointed it out.... Wow, I'm slow sometimes all the time.
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